will you drink from the glass???

blue angel · 2008-06-14, 15:59

Hi everyone
Do you follow the group or stand for yourself ???
This is a question that I always wondered
That's an essay I wrote and I hope you read it and then tell me your decision and opinions

When you have a different conviction from other people’s convictions and when your ambition is superior to reality around you, do you give up and surrender to reality OR do you hang onto your concepts?? Before you decide, let’s read this story.

Once upon time, an insanity pestilence settles in a river that crosses a town. Anyone who drinks from this river gets infected and goes crazy. The bedlams start to gather and talk with a language that other normal people can’t understand. One day the king woke up and found the queen crazy too. So he called his minister and asked him for guards and doctors. The minister informed the king that all the guards, doctors and people in the town became insane and that the king and his minister are the only sane here. The king wondered how he will govern a crazy town but the minister told him that those insane claims that they are the wise and the king and his minister are the insane. The minister told his king that they are only two and the insane are the majority so they hold the right, justice and virtues and they decide what is sane and what is insane. At the end, the king as

لا يمكنكم مشاهدة باقي الموضوع لأنك زائر غير منتسب لدينا ...
فإذا كنت مشترك مسبقا معنا فقم بتسجيل دخول بعضويتك الآن للمتابعة
وإذا لم تكن منتسباً لدينا ! فيمكنك التسجيل والإلتحاق لدينا بإمتلاك عضوية جديدة مجاناً
( من هنـــــ Click Hire ــــــا )

تنبيه من المدير العام : أي رد قصير ومختصر أو مخالف أو رابط لايعمل الرجاء التبليغ عنه بالضغط من هنا

* للتبليغ عن مخالفة هذه المشاركة

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سيف النصر · 2008-06-16, 19:38

well to say the truth >>>>you have the talent and the spirit of a writer .Yet i am sure you know no body is perfect and we make mistakes so w e can learn ,allow me then to point to some redundency in your writting which some times make the reader wonder about the point that have been evolved over and over but it is not always a good sign.next the title is simple and I am sure you could have found a more attractive title finally I belive and thats for myself that i will not drink the glass cause already evey single person is different in his ethics and beleive and if the one next to you will give you no benefit then he is just not your kind of a guy !!!thats my view
finally thanks for reading my review and mind & I hope i didnt sound harsh or anything >>peace

blue angel · 2008-06-16, 22:08

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	well to say the truth >>>>you have the talent and the spirit of a writer .

thanks. I appreciate your opinion and I'm proud of it
however I don't intend to be a writer and I don't write as a hobby
All my writings is for academaic purposes

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	Yet i am sure you know no body is perfect and we make mistakes so w e can learn ,allow me then to point to some redundency in your writting

sure feel free to point my mistakes
I'm still beginner in writing and I really appreciate your corrections

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	the point that have been evolved over and over but it is not always a good sign

ummmm I always make this mistake and repeat the ideas
I'll try to avoid it next time

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	next the title is simple and I am sure you could have found a more attractive title

I normally don't pay attention to title
I'll try to choose an attractive one next time

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	i will not drink the glass

I like youe opinion and your explanation

many thanks for passing and reading my journal
and millions of thanks for your wonderful response
again feel free to critize my writing because this is how we learn

THANKS

قتيبة · 2008-06-16, 22:51

about your first question I think I'll be the only sane one in the hole world

but regarding your second question
I always was the one who give that offer for others

thank you for this nice subject

blue angel · 2008-06-16, 22:55

Thanks for passing قتيبة
I liked your responses
gald that you like it

صوت حر · 2008-06-17, 02:09

Um .. I'll not drink from the glass

My sister, I have a wish to turn (for friendship) to God, his apostle, and the (fellowship of) believers, it is the fellowship of God that must certainly triumph. So, if the whole world is against me, I'll try to bear this pressures to accomplish my goal

I have a confidence in myself. So, if I make a discovery like Galileo Galilei and have proofs while the others haven't proofs to convince me, I will bear anything with the help of Allah.

I won't drink from the glass.

Sister, you have a talent in writing

May Allah help you to improve it

Thanks a million

will you drink from the glass???

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